TASK 3 WRITING 3


1.  How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion

Before we talk about adequate and inadequate cohesion, first we have to know about what is paragraph ? Paragraph is a piece of written text containing several sentences in a context. It means that the paragraph is built from the sequence of the sentences and has one idea or topic in the first sentence.

When we write paragraph with adequate and inadequate we can know about fixing about topic sentence, topic sentence support in making supporting sentence, and there are some component relevance, order, linking words, and repetition of key words, connection in the next sentence, and the last concluding sentence or conclude.

2. Tell more about cohesion

Cohesion is needed to make good sentence which has connection the other sentence and make sure that your words, ideas, and paragraphs fit together. So the reader can understand clearly.

3.   Difference between coherence and cohesion

a.     Coherence refers to how easy it is to understand the writing.

Cohesion refers to connectivity in a text.

b.     Coherence how understandable something is and how it is arranged in a logical way.

Cohesion ideas fit together well so that they form a united whole.

4.   Descriptive paragraph  and analyzing

This Is Real, This Is Me

Well my beloved reader, I would like to describe about myself and all of thing about myself. I do it to share about myself for the other especially my faithful reader. Here, I would like to tell you about my appearance, little bit about my live, my hobby, and the reason why I am spending my time for it.  1.My name is Arum Nur Wijayanti. Some of my friend in campus call me Arum, Nur, and Rumana. I think it is so silly but I enjoy it.  2. I was born on Gunung Sugih, August 15^th 1994. I am 19 years old.  3. I live at Jalan Tulung itik-Gunung Sari, Gunung Sugih, central Lampung. I live with my mother, my father, and my sister. I am a female and I am a cute girl. My weight is 44kg and my height 144 cm. I have short body. My colour skin is bright brown. I have black and short hair. My eyes is round and curve. I have a medium nose and my lips is sensual lips. 4. I am very diligent, fussy, shy and prodigal. I am the last child in my family, so sometimes I childish  with my parents and my boy friend. 5. I have the best thing in my life. When I was elementary school I always entered in three best student in my class. Then I got scholarshiph in elementary. Talking about my hobby.  6. My hobby is sleeping. I spend my time to sleep because after sleeping I got many inspiration and I feel refresh. If I am not sleep or take rest I can’t do my daily activities, especially do assignment my lovely lesson writing 3. So before I do something I have to sleep first. Although it is silly hobby but it is my favorite hobby than other hobby. That’s about myself “this is real, this is me’’. That’s all about myself and this real this me.

      5. The sentences had underlined is categorized into cohesion because:

1.  The first underlined sentence’s ideas is the writers name and related with next sentence tell about the writers name in her campus.

2. The first sentence contain of the writer was born and the second sentence contain of age’s writer.it has refer to the first sentence.

3. The third underlined sentence’s ideas contain adverb of place or the writers live.

4. The fourth underlined sentence’s ideas explain about the writers attitude and the next sentence related from the first sentence.

5.   The fifth underlined sentence’s ideas explain the best thing in the writers live. It has related in the next sentence.

6. The sixth underlined sentence’s ideas related with the next sentence, Explain about the hobbies of the writer.