Task 2 writing 3

The way to write paragraph with adequate and coherence :

The first Unity discuss about mean idea from beginning to the ending. In a good paragraph you have to write topic sentence, body or supporting sentence, and concluding sentence. Our idea its can be adequate unity if we put our idea into topic sentence.

The second is Coherence. Coherence means balance. It is the appropriate connections among the sentences. The example if our topic about how to make coffe we must our supporting sentence  balance with the topic that is process how to make coffe.

So adequate unity and coherence mean that has  one mean idea and all the supporting sentence are detail and balance.

Descriptive paragraph :

This Is Real, This Is Me

Well my beloved reader, I would like to describe about myself and all of thing about myself. I do it to share about myself for the other especially my faithful reader. Here, I would like to tell you about my appearance, little bit about my live, my hobby, and the reason why I am spending my time for it. My name is Arum Nur Wijayanti but some of my friend in campus call me Arum, Nur, and Rumana. I think it is so silly but I enjoy it. I was born on Gunung Sugih, August 15^th 1994. I am 19 years old. I live at Jalan Tulung itik-Gunung Sari, Gunung Sugih, central Lampung. I live with my mother, my father, and my sister. I am a female and I am a cute girl. My weight is 44kg and my height 144 cm. I have short body. My colour skin is bright brown. I have black and short hair. My eyes is round and curve. I have a medium nose and my lips is sensual lips. I am very diligent, fussy, shy and prodigal. I am the last child in my family, so sometimes I childish  with my parents and my boy friend. I have the best thing in my life. When I was elementary school I always entered in three best student in my class. Then I got scholarshiph in elementary. Talking about my hobby. My hobby is sleeping. I spend my time to sleep because after sleeping I got many inspiration and I feel refresh. If I am not sleep or take rest I can’t do my daily activities, especially do assignment my lovely lesson writing 3. So before I do something I have to sleep first. Although it is silly hobby but it is my favorite hobby than other hobby. That’s about myself “this is real, this is me’’. That’s all about myself and this real this me.

Note    :

Black colour      : Title

Red colour        : Introduction

Green colour     : Identification

Blue colour        : Description

Purple colour     : Concluding