Unpayable Handbag
My bad experience
when I failure to bought handbag in supermarket. This happened when I in
Bekasi. One day there was a young girl named Arum Nur Wijayanti. She is
careless and prodigal girl. She was attractive and cheerful in daily
activity. She was me. I lived with her
parents and my sisters. All of my
sisters already got married. My parents
and my sister is a teacher. I was school in
SMA N 1 PUNGGUR when the third semester I went to Bekasi to visited my
sister. I went to Bekasi with my father by bus. When arrived in my sister’s
house I did my activity like usual in my house. But in Bekasi I always go around by bicycle. I always go alone by bicycle in
every morning and evening.
The next
evening I go around by bicycle. I went to come back in her village. So I
prepared my needed for tomorrow. When go around I went to supermarket to bought handbag for my
things, because I brought many things so I need handbag. I brought a few of
money that was Rp 20.000 to bought that handbag. When I entered in supermarket
I was looking for that handbag, and the situation in supermarket was crowded in
the evening. I found that handbag and I took. The price was not written as
usual in the handbag. So I just took. I made line with the other customer and
the made line was so long. Then when my turn I said “How much?” and the caseer
said “Just it, RP 27.500”. Then I was so shock and
sad because the money was not enough with the price. The price was more
expansive then the money which I brought it. Than the caseer said “You
would take it this handbag?” and I said “sorry my
money was not enough. I failure to bought this handbag and I will bought
someday, thank you”. I went out from the
supermarket with my disenchanted.
I
was so sad, shy, and I ride her bicycle while cried. I didn’t tell with my father and my sister and the
next morning I back to her village with my father by travel.
NOTE :
A. The purpose of text
To
tell the reader about the writer’s failure experience when the writer was in
supermarket.
B.
Generic structure
Red :
Orientation (introduction, characters)
Purple :
Complication (Setting, plot, climax)
Green :
Resolution (conclution)
Orange : Re-orientation
Underlined : Topic sentence (Supporting sentences
are following the topic sentence)
Theme : Failure experience
Title :
Unpayable handbag
Plot : Forward
Character : I, My
father, The caseer, My sister.
Setting : Place= In
supermarket
Time =
In the evening
Situation = Crowded, and sad.
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