TASK 3 WRITING 3


1.  How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion

Before we talk about adequate and inadequate cohesion, first we have to know about what is paragraph ? Paragraph is a piece of written text containing several sentences in a context. It means that the paragraph is built from the sequence of the sentences and has one idea or topic in the first sentence.

When we write paragraph with adequate and inadequate we can know about fixing about topic sentence, topic sentence support in making supporting sentence, and there are some component relevance, order, linking words, and repetition of key words, connection in the next sentence, and the last concluding sentence or conclude.

2. Tell more about cohesion

Cohesion is needed to make good sentence which has connection the other sentence and make sure that your words, ideas, and paragraphs fit together. So the reader can understand clearly.

3.   Difference between coherence and cohesion

a.     Coherence refers to how easy it is to understand the writing.

Cohesion refers to connectivity in a text.

b.     Coherence how understandable something is and how it is arranged in a logical way.

Cohesion ideas fit together well so that they form a united whole.

4.   Descriptive paragraph  and analyzing

This Is Real, This Is Me

Well my beloved reader, I would like to describe about myself and all of thing about myself. I do it to share about myself for the other especially my faithful reader. Here, I would like to tell you about my appearance, little bit about my live, my hobby, and the reason why I am spending my time for it.  1.My name is Arum Nur Wijayanti. Some of my friend in campus call me Arum, Nur, and Rumana. I think it is so silly but I enjoy it.  2. I was born on Gunung Sugih, August 15^th 1994. I am 19 years old.  3. I live at Jalan Tulung itik-Gunung Sari, Gunung Sugih, central Lampung. I live with my mother, my father, and my sister. I am a female and I am a cute girl. My weight is 44kg and my height 144 cm. I have short body. My colour skin is bright brown. I have black and short hair. My eyes is round and curve. I have a medium nose and my lips is sensual lips. 4. I am very diligent, fussy, shy and prodigal. I am the last child in my family, so sometimes I childish  with my parents and my boy friend. 5. I have the best thing in my life. When I was elementary school I always entered in three best student in my class. Then I got scholarshiph in elementary. Talking about my hobby.  6. My hobby is sleeping. I spend my time to sleep because after sleeping I got many inspiration and I feel refresh. If I am not sleep or take rest I can’t do my daily activities, especially do assignment my lovely lesson writing 3. So before I do something I have to sleep first. Although it is silly hobby but it is my favorite hobby than other hobby. That’s about myself “this is real, this is me’’. That’s all about myself and this real this me.

      5. The sentences had underlined is categorized into cohesion because:

1.  The first underlined sentence’s ideas is the writers name and related with next sentence tell about the writers name in her campus.

2. The first sentence contain of the writer was born and the second sentence contain of age’s writer.it has refer to the first sentence.

3. The third underlined sentence’s ideas contain adverb of place or the writers live.

4. The fourth underlined sentence’s ideas explain about the writers attitude and the next sentence related from the first sentence.

5.   The fifth underlined sentence’s ideas explain the best thing in the writers live. It has related in the next sentence.

6. The sixth underlined sentence’s ideas related with the next sentence, Explain about the hobbies of the writer.

Task 2 writing 3

The way to write paragraph with adequate and coherence :

The first Unity discuss about mean idea from beginning to the ending. In a good paragraph you have to write topic sentence, body or supporting sentence, and concluding sentence. Our idea its can be adequate unity if we put our idea into topic sentence.

The second is Coherence. Coherence means balance. It is the appropriate connections among the sentences. The example if our topic about how to make coffe we must our supporting sentence  balance with the topic that is process how to make coffe.

So adequate unity and coherence mean that has  one mean idea and all the supporting sentence are detail and balance.

Descriptive paragraph :

This Is Real, This Is Me

Well my beloved reader, I would like to describe about myself and all of thing about myself. I do it to share about myself for the other especially my faithful reader. Here, I would like to tell you about my appearance, little bit about my live, my hobby, and the reason why I am spending my time for it. My name is Arum Nur Wijayanti but some of my friend in campus call me Arum, Nur, and Rumana. I think it is so silly but I enjoy it. I was born on Gunung Sugih, August 15^th 1994. I am 19 years old. I live at Jalan Tulung itik-Gunung Sari, Gunung Sugih, central Lampung. I live with my mother, my father, and my sister. I am a female and I am a cute girl. My weight is 44kg and my height 144 cm. I have short body. My colour skin is bright brown. I have black and short hair. My eyes is round and curve. I have a medium nose and my lips is sensual lips. I am very diligent, fussy, shy and prodigal. I am the last child in my family, so sometimes I childish  with my parents and my boy friend. I have the best thing in my life. When I was elementary school I always entered in three best student in my class. Then I got scholarshiph in elementary. Talking about my hobby. My hobby is sleeping. I spend my time to sleep because after sleeping I got many inspiration and I feel refresh. If I am not sleep or take rest I can’t do my daily activities, especially do assignment my lovely lesson writing 3. So before I do something I have to sleep first. Although it is silly hobby but it is my favorite hobby than other hobby. That’s about myself “this is real, this is me’’. That’s all about myself and this real this me.

Note    :

Black colour      : Title

Red colour        : Introduction

Green colour     : Identification

Blue colour        : Description

Purple colour     : Concluding

a.       Descriptive text is text which using in daily activities how to describe thing, place, person, animal, etc. Descriptive text focus in one specific participants, and usually  frequent use of epithets and classifiers in nominal group.

Generic structure

·      Identification  : Part of descriptive text about what we will description, and always in the first paragraph because identification as indtroducing in general. Identification its cover background knowledge have to give before reader will describing.

·      Description      :  The next paragraph should more specific. And this paragraph about describing something what we will describe.

Language forms

·       Using simple present tense

·       Using of degree of comparision

·       Using of adjectives and compound adjectives          

·       Using of Linking Verbs/ relating verbs

·       Focus in one object

b.      Narrative text is text that tells about something that did not really happen but only the reef  by writer and tell something imagination and usually occur in the past time.

Generic structure

v Orientation      : introducing in the form of  “ what is the story about, who is the participant, where is the place setting, when is the time setting “ .

v Complication   : This paragraph is the main of narrative text. This text just tell incident with other incident.

v Resolution       : The problem can be solved.In narrative text, every problem that arise must be give a solution. Can be close happy ending or sad ending.

Language forms

v Use of simple past tense

v Use of adverbial phrases of time and place

v Use of action verbs

c.       Expository text is that is used to give explain, describe, give information or inform.

Generic structure

Ø Topic sentence

Ø Supporting sentence

Ø Concluding sentence

        Language forms

Ø Using present tense

Ø Using process verb

Ø Using identific transitions

Ø Using process verb : Become, remain, develop, nd continue.

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